Yawn. I’m bored. Got nothing to do. I’ve been sitting at my desk, writing poems, since morning. I edited this tiny thing a few hours ago. It’s probably not good but I like it because it contains only one sentence.
It is a dark night, and
my eyes ache—
not from the tears I’ve shed
(for out of my eyes have spilled
none)
but from the tears I’ve kept.
11 responses so far ↓
Kishore // May 15, 2008 at 7:43 pm
A good concept. And well written. Where are the other poems you’ve written since morning, Vasudha, if I’m not prying?
Vasudha // May 15, 2008 at 7:49 pm
Umm… I’ll post one tomorrow, perhaps.
Akshay // May 16, 2008 at 1:16 am
If that’s what you generate when you are bored, then God help us when you have got the muse on overdrive!
(In short, nice!)
Awais // May 16, 2008 at 4:07 pm
Indeed, if you are this creative when you are bored, then you’ll do miracles when you are in form.
Vasudha // May 16, 2008 at 6:53 pm
Thanks for your lovely comments, guys.
Kishore // May 16, 2008 at 7:44 pm
Lol @ Akshay.. Agreed, Akshay and Awais..
khushbu // May 19, 2008 at 9:53 pm
hey vasu…i dnt thnk ill need 2 comment nethn else after Kishore,Akshay and Awais….gud 1
bt i prsnly thnk tht u shud complete it..or rite an anothr 1 based on d same concept…..waiting 4 it!![:)]
Vasudha // May 19, 2008 at 10:29 pm
@Khushbu:
Thanks for commenting.
I’ll definitely write one for you, Kuku.
san // May 22, 2008 at 4:38 pm
well said.
allirekha // June 2, 2008 at 3:13 pm
the last line is simple beautiful
allirekha // June 2, 2008 at 3:14 pm
** simply**
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